【Oliver】 Take Me Down (Original Song)

*UPDATE*
My new EP is out now! Mostly Oliver :
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=au0P73WtNSk

*old post*
A pretty complex arrangement here for you all. Hope you enjoy it!

I've been pretty inactive lately, life gets busier because of my internship, even this song was made when I was going to work with train. But I will still keep posting stuff of course. I'm thinking of making an oliver album this time, but I haven't planned anything yet. Well, I have some WIPs I made in train...lol I found that there's a lot of inspirational stuff around me while I'm in the train.

Image : http://www.zerochan.net/1474430

I can't find the original artist account, I have the pixiv id but it seems that the artist has deleted it. I don't even know the name of the artist. Would be nice if someone can tell me the name of the artist. Here's the pixiv id btw : Pixiv Id 2185324

and the piapro link for the pic: piapro.jp/t/FwGn

mp3 : http://soundcloud.com/bhlife/take-me-down/s-zXt1W

other mp3 link :
http://www.mediafire.com/download/04tofztiq77iyxa/Take_Me_Down.mp3

vsqx : http://www.mediafire.com/download/uglf1ulzneun0te/Take_Me_Down.vsqx

off vocal : http://soundcloud.com/bhlife/take-me-down-instrumental/s-7AIXi

Lyrics :

silently
it's coming to me
lost in this dream
lost in this city

lost in this shadow
i try to believe
i try to ignore it
cause it isn't real

but why should i care
i shouldn't be there
i'm walking on water
i run out of air

and i can't remember
the promise you made
but we never met
and you never cared

i made a mistake so you can just take me down
i broke it apart so you can just take me down
i made you suffer so you can just take me down
i made you cry so you can just take me down

I've tried to forget it
the anomaly

Rate, give some opinions or advices and enjoy!